Assignment 5 – Making it up – tutor feedback

My feedback for assignment five can be read here. My conversation with Andrew was very useful and the main point he made in our discussion and in the written feedback about the image be too busy was obvious as soon as he mentioned it. However, I also found the feedback frustrating as it is similar to the feedback I received for assignment three about the need for me to edit my work more rigorously, something that I am obviously not doing well. I spent a lot of time on this assignment developing ideas that I was not happy with and … Continue reading Assignment 5 – Making it up – tutor feedback

Assignment 4 – A picture is worth a thousand words – tutor feedback

As I expected the feedback from my tutor was uncompromising and can be read here I have never found essay writing easy and I think my tutor’s feedback was basically ‘not interested in what’s happened in the past, sort it out’. He made the point that written work accounts for approximately half the overall mark for the degree course and that if I want to continue then I need to address my issues with essay writing. To that end I will take some time and re-work this assignment. Continue reading Assignment 4 – A picture is worth a thousand words – tutor feedback

Assignment 3 – Putting yourself in the picture – tutor feedback

Feedback for assignment four can be read here. I found the feedback session very useful as it high-lighted a some areas that I have overlooked when submitting my assignments and I think there are two key learnings to take from it. The first learning is to know when to stop and the second to think more about how I present my assignments. Although I started the assignment in a negative frame of mind and did not enjoy the diary keeping element of it, when it came to producing and image I had a very clear idea of what I wanted … Continue reading Assignment 3 – Putting yourself in the picture – tutor feedback

Assignment 2 – Photographing the unseen – Tutor feedback

My feed back for assignment 2 can be read here. If I’m honest I think the written feedback is more positive than our skype call but either way I have no issue with it as I think it is an accurate reflection of the work submitted. I think the feedback reflects the struggles I had with this assignment and so it was not a suprise and I think there are two things that I can take out of it, first that I need to be clear in my mind what I am trying to communicate and I know that this … Continue reading Assignment 2 – Photographing the unseen – Tutor feedback