As I expected the feedback from my tutor was uncompromising and can be read here

I have never found essay writing easy and I think my tutor’s feedback was basically ‘not interested in what’s happened in the past, sort it out’. He made the point that written work accounts for approximately half the overall mark for the degree course and that if I want to continue then I need to address my issues with essay writing. To that end I will take some time and re-work this assignment.