My feed back for assignment 2 can be read here.
If I’m honest I think the written feedback is more positive than our skype call but either way I have no issue with it as I think it is an accurate reflection of the work submitted.
I think the feedback reflects the struggles I had with this assignment and so it was not a suprise and I think there are two things that I can take out of it, first that I need to be clear in my mind what I am trying to communicate and I know that this was not the case for this assignment. The other point that I need to address is preparation and research, I tend to do very little when it comes to assignments and this impacts the clarity of ideas and the finished submission. Unfortunately this is not new!
My intention is to re-submit work for assigment 2 but at this stage I am not sure if I will re-work the existing subject or possibly start from scratch.